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Wednesday, 24 August 2011

My writing

For writing we are learning to:

.Text is organized into paragraphs

.Description is clear and easy to picture in the readers mind

.Specific adjectives and verbs

.Interesting words

.Has authentic problem

.The beginning had a hook-made me want to read on

.Story does not drag on

.The problem isn't solved straight Away different attempts to solve it

.The problem is solved at the end

.Characters are described well at the beginning

.Punctuation and spelling is correct




My story has a hook at the beginning and has interesting words

1 comment:

  1. Your story has a beginning with a hook. I love the language you use in your writing. Words like vast certainly paint a picture for the reader.

    Mr L

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