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Tuesday, 1 November 2011

Inquiry stuff


For inquiry we are learning about war.Here I have made a timeline about the wars NZ have fought in the past.Here it is enjoy


Theo

Inquiry

For inquiry we are Learning about NZ at war.Here I have drawn a diagram about how ww1 started enjoy.


Theo

Thursday, 15 September 2011





This is my book week star my book week star is called heroes of Olympus by Rick riordin

Wednesday, 24 August 2011

My writing

For writing we are learning to:

.Text is organized into paragraphs

.Description is clear and easy to picture in the readers mind

.Specific adjectives and verbs

.Interesting words

.Has authentic problem

.The beginning had a hook-made me want to read on

.Story does not drag on

.The problem isn't solved straight Away different attempts to solve it

.The problem is solved at the end

.Characters are described well at the beginning

.Punctuation and spelling is correct




My story has a hook at the beginning and has interesting words